【文学原创】贴一贴翻译的几首英文小诗
本帖最后由 卫康 于 2011-11-16 20:05 编辑第一首是英国诗人拉金的《为何昨夜我梦见了你（Why Did I Dream of You Last Night?）》：
原诗：Why did I dream of you last night?Now morning is pushing back hair with grey light.Memories strike home, like slaps in the face;Raised on elbow, I stare at the pale fogbeyond the window.
So many things I had thought forgottenReturn to my mind with stranger pain:Like letters that arrive addressed to someoneWho left the house so many years ago.
译作：为何昨夜我梦见了你？现在黎明已至，用它灰白色的光梳理我的头发回忆撞击心门，似乎也在拍打着我的面颊我用手臂撑起身子，凝望苍白的雾霭透过 那一边的窗台
那些我原本以为早已忘却的事此刻却带着莫名的痛楚重回心中——就像那些寄给故人的信笺在它们送达之时 早已是人去楼空
第二首是一首小诗《绿》
原诗：The dawn was apple-green,The sky was green wine held up in the sun,The moon was a golden petal between.She opened her eyes, and greenThe shone, clear like flowers undoneFor the first time, now for the first time seen. 译作：黎明成了苹果绿的，天空像是阳光下举起的绿色美酒，而月亮 就是一片缀于其间的金色花瓣她打开了眼睛，和那绿色，眼波清澈而明媚，宛如尚未绽放的花蕾，第一次，在此刻第一次被人瞥见
第三首是小诗《印象》的一小段：
原诗：The flower which the wind has shaken Is soon filled again with rain; So does my heart fill slowly with tears, Until you return. 译作：被风摇过的花朵，不久又重新承满了雨滴，我的心也渐渐承满了泪，直等到你重回。
几首现代诗小而精，谢谢楼主与大家分享。 中国的现代诗，是否就是受了西方的影响呢？
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